Draft for the School Newsletter
[1] Our school library recently created a “quiet hour” from 7:30 to 8:30 each morning. During this period, students may read or study in a calm place before classes begin.
[2] The trial began after a student survey showed that many learners wanted such a place. In its first month, an average of 34 students used the library each morning. This result suggests that the new service meets a real need.
[3] [ A ], the library has added six charging stations for tablets. These stations allow students to prepare digital materials during quiet hour. Students may use them before classes without leaving the library. The company that donated them also sponsors a local football team.
[4] The quiet hour will continue next term, and the library staff plan to provide more desks.
Editor's notes
Presentation outline
Which sentence should be removed or moved because it is outside paragraph 3's focus?
Which expression best fits [ A ] at the beginning of paragraph 3?
What does “These stations” in paragraph 3 refer to?
What is the main role of paragraph 2?
Which sentence would best respond to the editor's note about paragraph 4?
Which note best belongs under the presentation heading “Future plans”?
Draft for the School Newsletter
[1] Our school library recently created a “quiet hour” from 7:30 to 8:30 each morning. During this period, students may read or study in a calm place before classes begin.
[2] The trial began after a student survey showed that many learners wanted such a place. In its first month, an average of 34 students used the library each morning. This result suggests that the new service meets a real need.
[3] [ A ], the library has added six charging stations for tablets. These stations allow students to prepare digital materials during quiet hour. Students may use them before classes without leaving the library. The company that donated them also sponsors a local football team.
[4] The quiet hour will continue next term, and the library staff plan to provide more desks.
Editor's notes
Presentation outline
Which sentence should be removed or moved because it is outside paragraph 3's focus?
Which expression best fits [ A ] at the beginning of paragraph 3?
What does “These stations” in paragraph 3 refer to?
What is the main role of paragraph 2?
Which sentence would best respond to the editor's note about paragraph 4?
Which note best belongs under the presentation heading “Future plans”?